▶ Your Answer : The charts show the percentage of the British students, who are able to speak languages other than English, in 2000 and in 2010. In 2000, 20% of the British students were able to speak no other language. But in 2010 the number has decreased to 10%. It is considered that many British students studied other languages other than English.
First Frist of all, in 2010 the percentage of the British students who can speak French only and another language is decreased decreaed by 5% rather than in 2000. However in 2000 the percentage of both students two other languages and speaking Spanish only and those speaking two other languages is increased by 5% more than in 2010. This means that they prefer to study about Spanish only and two other languages more than French and another language. 시간이 흘러 비율이 변화했다고 해서 선호도에 대한 결론을 내릴 수는 없습니다. 과도한 유추나 해석은 감점요인이 되기 때문에 조심해야 합니다.
Secondly, the percentage of German only in 2000 and 2010 hasn't changed. Thus, British students think that German languages is important less than Spanish languages because the percantage of Spanish is increased in 2010. 밑줄 친 문장도 표에 대한 해석이 아니라 필자의 추측이기 때문에 빼는 게 좋을 것 같아요.
Overall, the percentage of two other languages is the biggest in 2000 and 2010. So, British students feel that speaking two other languages is helpful about their career for getting a job and good various opportunities. 이 부분도 불필요한 추측입니다.
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