▶ Your Answer :
Dear Anna
Hi, how are you? My name is
Chris. I am one of your professors, and I have heard that you are concerning
about quitting university to find a job now. I am writing this letter to give
some advice to you. I hope this letter is helpful for your future.
I always thought that you are a
very good student. You are very diligent and intuitive. Also, since you are
sociable, many students like you so much.
As you know, the economy is
not doing well at the moment. So, it is hard to find a job now. However, since the
economy may be doing better in a few years later, more companies would be
willing to hire people. Therefore, you are going to be easy to find a job after
you will graduate from university. Also, if you finish your current high level education, you would
be able to have more chances to get a job because many companies these days want
well-educated people.
If you want to discuss
further, please contact me. My email address is 123@456.com.
If you prefer, you can visit my office.
Sincerely,
Chris
Task Achievement
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Coherence and Cohesion
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Lexical Resource
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Grammatical Range and Accuracy
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TOTAL
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8
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8
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7
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7
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7.5
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