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In recent years, a number of different kinds of music are heard among
people. The essay will discuss the reasons why music is needed, and I will give
my own opinion that traditional music in a country is more significant than the
international music recently popular.
Music is extremely important because it has a significant
cultural value. To be specific, all All types of music have their unique
socio-cultural implications as a symbolic context. For example, rap music has
been produced by black people in order to express their voices against racism the
racist, representing the lack of social justice in some western nations. In
addition, people can significantly deal with stress by listening to it. In
particular, young generations visit many international rock concerts to gain
energy to go through their daily life.
In my opinion, traditional music is more valuable than
international records (이런 식의 동의어도 가능합니다.) one because a lot of pieces of traditional one are expected to
disappear in the near future. While international and modern music is already
recorded so that people can freely listen to it in the future with their
electronics such as MP3 and smartphone, the traditional one is on the verge of disappearance as a large amount of it is not recorded so far. If we would not
preserve it (1인칭이 꼭 필요한 상황이 아니므로 대체가 필요합니다.), human beings would lose the historical clues that are able to
provide us (여기 역시 마찬가지이겠고, 또한) with better understandings of the past. For instance, a piece of
Korean traditional music, which is called Chang, involves the historical and
social contexts of the Chosun Josen dynasty had unfair social systems for musicians. The
disappearance of this part of unique culture may deprive us (여기도 그렇습니다.) of the priceless
and invisible asset forever.
In conclusion, music is compulsory for people because it has
cultural values and is beneficial to cope with stress of plenty of people in
modern times. In particular, I believe that traditional one has to be treated
more valuable before we lose it (여기도 1인칭을 대체해주셔야 합니다.). |