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Although there are a lot of fitness centers nowadays, a sedentary life trend has become popular more and more over the globe. This essay will discuss a the problems caused by this before suggesting a solution.
It is undeniable that the inactive lifestyle definitely causes uncountable health problems. Firstly, the inactive trend will lead people to become obese obesity, which makes people easy to get diseases such as heart problems and blood pressure issue. For instance, people who did not move a lot and got heavier have to take medical checks more often than others to keep in healthy. Furthermore, this tendency could cause depression. In additions, in terms of society, it would affect the labor market since people who got sick could not work well.
To solve this these issues, I believe, the government should make a campaign to know the benefits of an active lifestyle and people would have to follow the plan sincerely. There are many people who do not realize yet how harmful is the inactive habits are, or even if they know that, do not try change it. It is true that this kinds of habits cannot change easily and shortly. That is why we need to encourage people to do by government. (여기는 1인칭이 필요한 상황이 아니므로 수정해주세요~) If people were educated, they will try to take a next further steps to improve their lifestyle. Moreover, people have to open their mind and try to adopt it.
In conclusion, even though this sedentary life tendency causes some problems on not only people but also society, I think we (역시 1인칭이 필요한 상황이 아닙니다.) can control it well through making efforts with government and people together. |