Some people think parents should supervise their children’s activities closely, while others believe children should have more freedom. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
One of the major concerns of parents is that they can take part closely in children’s play to some extent. In this regard, some people argue that parents should participate in that for their children’s safety, whereas other say that this behavior rather have a negative effect on children. Both views will be discus and I think the latter view is more persuasive.
To begin with, children needs some protector for safety reasons during they do some activities. It has been observed that a good number of toy and the place of play has been tremendous developing in order to promote brains of young people compared to the past. Notwithstanding, there are some potential risk factors which could cause harm to children everywhere such as some edge of the box, beads and screws of slide. Thus, people should be involved in the activities of children because they try to pull some dangerous things apart their children as possible as much. Even, the case of that if children are younger, parents had to offer some safety precautions directly.
However, there are more advantageous in the respect of without the assistance of parents. First of all, the parts of young people’s brain receive strong stimulate and more secrets some activation materials such as adrenaline that is useful to the brains when youngsters do something spontaneously like pile up blocks. Secondly, parents should give some opportunities that solve the problems by young people oneself. If people interfere in their own activities, children might receive some guides and solutions or they do not follow the process of their think and with a high chance to be passivity.
In conclusion, although there are some dangerous thigs, parents provide proper circumstances that children face some issues for their ingenuity and independent.
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