When it comes to language, using the language and knowing the usage of the language is important fact to learn it.
-When it comes to learning a language, using it and mastering its usage are the most important facts.
+일단 글쓴이분의 의도에서 약간 벗어날 수 있지만...요렇게 쓰는게 매끄럽지 않을까..감히 적어봅니다. fact대신에 좀 더 적당한 단어가 생각이 안나네요...아아.뭔가가 있는데..
The Most popular idea to learn language, of course there are many different ways, is going the country where the language one may want to learn is mostly used.
-Out of all those different ways to learn a language, the most popular and preferred one is going to the country where the language one wants to learn is mostly used.
+문법적인 오류가 몇가지 보입네다! Most 여기서 대문자 실수 하나,중간에 of course가 아이엘츠 시험의 cohesion인가...그 부분에서 걸리는 듯...그리고 going 담에 to 붙이셔야죠.
히히. 그래서 빨강색으로 재탄생 시켰구요. 님의 where 부터는 괜찮네요.!
However, considering many other factors spread over the world, it cannot be said the best way for studying English is studying in English based country.
-However, considering many global factors that are occuring consistently around us,it cannot be said that the best way to study English is to study in an English-based country.
+전세계적으로 퍼져있는 여러 요인들로 인해~~ 이런 뜻인거 같은데 글쎄요. 밑에 문단이 이 문장에 적합한 내용으로 전개가 되고 있는지...솔직히 딱 처음봤을때 감이 안옵니다. 무슨 뜻을 말하고 있는건지..어쨌든 제 나름대로 고쳐봤습니다. 최대한 글쓴이 분의 의도에서 벗어나지 않도록 했어요!
First, many demerit points are behind if one is going to an English speaking country only for learning English.
+NONE!!:>
One has to be supported by parents from tuition fee to small amount of money like for snacks or activity expenses.
-Since it is hard to work and study at the same time for one, one's parents might have to support him or her from paying one's tuition fees to paying small amounts of money for snacks or activity expenses.
+이 문장에서 one 이 왜 부모님들로부터 서포트를 받아야 하는지 근거가 나타나있지 않아서 나름 추가해봤습니다.
Moreover, if the student is young, parents would be worry about him/her always.
-Moreover, if one is young, they would be worried about him or her always.
+이미 위에서 parent 나왔으니까 굳이 다시 쓸 필욘 없겠죠.
In the student’s case, sometimes he/she will suffer from loneliness, homesick, if he/she is not good at English yet, and problems from verbal matter.
-In case of the one learning English, one might realize that lacking fluency in speaking, creates stressful situations such as misunderstanding and communication blocks. This further makes one feel lonely and homesick.
+verbal matter가 정확히 무엇을 말하는지 몰라서..나름 그 예를 들어서 문장을 고쳐봤습니다.문장도 어색한 점이 없지않아 있어 좀 고쳤습니다.
Albeit one will be cared by the native guardian hired from an agency through paying money, it is really hard to give the one attention like its real parents do.
-Albeit one would be cared by a native guardian who was hired from an agency and paid for, it would be really hard to give one the same attention like one's parents used to give.
+its real parent 에서 its 를 쓰시면 안되요!! 우리가 여기서 말하는 one은 사람이지 물건이 아니지 않사옵니까!
Second, improved technology can be discussed instead of not going directly to English based country.
-Second, improved technology can be discussed as an alternative of leraning English instead of going to an English-based country directly.
+discussed다음에 뭔가 부족합니다..그래서 붙였구요.
We are living in the global century.
-We are living in a century of fast globarization.
+뭔가 이것도 ... 전하려는 의미가 약해서.
Furthermore, we are enjoying connected cultures of all over the world through medias like the internet, TV and newspaper. These days, it is absolutely easy to find good study materials, even sometimes free items are around in the (on the)internet. People can meet the people(those)living in English-speaking country(-ies) through messengers. Also, we can connect to other countries to learn English(by what????connect가 전화로연결한다란뜻으로쓰신건지?).
Third, as the skill of dealing well with at least one another language is essential tool to live this society, people are eager to produce several ways to let people learn English.
-Lastly, people are eager to look for various ways to educate younger generations English as being able to deal with at least one language is an essential tool to live in this society.
+one another에서 잠깐 멈칫..이건 무쓴 뜻인지...this society앞에 in을 잃어버리셨쿤요.
People can find many language schools where many native English speakers are as teachers.
-Many language schools could be easily found where native English speakers work as teachers
If people do not have enough time to attend the lecture, technology and many businesses related to education will kindly lead people to join online study room.
-If one who is attending a language school could not listen to a lecture due to lack of time,
one does not have to be ancious. One would be able to catch up by joining an online study room of one's school.
To sum, as shown above statements, it cannot be the best way to study English in English speaking country. People can find their own way considering their financial situation, English level or time. In that several ways can be the best or better way of leaning English, I do not agree that statement.
-To sum up, going to an English-based country to learn English is not necessarily the best way. As mentioned in the above statements, people can find their own ways to learn English according to their financial situations, English levels or time. I do not think there are better or best ways to learn languages.It depends on people themselves. |