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Dear James,
Firstly, I am so glad about your acceptance with taking care of my house during my leaving. I am writing this letter to inform you about my absence in detail and some of concerns you have to know.
As I told you last night, I have business trip >> travel은 동사입니다, an engineering exhibition at Dubai, Saudi Arabia from next Monday. Since it will be held in worldwide scale, this enables interactions between people from various countries with interesting ideas. Thus, I cannot >> cannot 붙여주세요 miss this grand opportunity for my future career.
In addition to my reasoning, I forgot to tell you about my new house. It located at a block away from my previous place. It has identical appearance which you can distinguish it without any worries. My house painted with yellow and black color, such as a beehive. You can see a front yard with two apple trees, with a small pool and a sun bed in between. I hope this information helps you greatly in finding my home.
Furthermore, there are few things you must know about my house. Please do not open up the window next to the door, because there have been some crimes, robberies, around my place. Besides, that, I have unpacked my burden and left them in a garage, so please park your car at nearby the house. I am really Sorry for such inconveniences.
Again, I appreciate kind of you.
Best regards,
YKim
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