▶ Your Answer : The chart below illustrates the whole process of an the English language school which students go through until the end <(the end of what?). This process has two classes, which is divided according to the test results. However, whichever class the students got in first, they will all end up in the same ending, the pay-back of 50% of their fees.
To be more specific, the very beginning of the process is 'Registering'. Once students have registered, they are going to take tests, which is used to decide the class. There are two 2 classes, class 1 and class 2. After students are assigned to a the class, they go through the course and take an exam, in which they will either pass or fail. Until here, students in class 1 and class 2 will all have gone the same process. However, after this exams their ways are different according to the class they were in. In the case of the students who were in the class 1, if they pass the exam they will be moved to class 2, but if they fail the exam, they will have the repeat class 1 until they pass the exam. the exam is to go up to the class 2, if they fail, they cannot got in to class 2 and re-do the course until they pass. If they pass, they go to class 2 and follow the process in class 2.
However, for the students in class 2, the exam is to finish the course and get the rewards of 50% pay-back of the fees. If they pass, they will be able to finish their course and get the reimbursement. If they fail, they need to retake the course until they pass and end the course.
Score: 7 Comment: 일부 silly mistakes나 editing이 필요한 부분 빼고 잘 서술 해주셨습니다. 차트 flow를 잘 이해하신게 보입니다. process 는 procedure이라고 하실 수 있고 go through는 심플하게 do 라고 하실 수 있습니다. 하지만 collocation상 go through라는 표현이 제일 적합합니다. 수고 하셨습니다.
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