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The bar chart illustrates how changes in five different cities appeared regarding average house prices during the period from 1990 to 2002 compared with the prices for the year 1989.
It is obvious that the average house prices of most countries fell from 1990 to 1995 than the year 1989. In the Meanwhile, house prices in overall countries went up from 1996 to 2002, but Tokyo was the only country that prices fell had the fallen prices for average houses. Over the five 5 years after 1989, the cost for average homes in Tokyo and London fell as about 8%, while that in New York fell as 5%. By contrast, Madrid had the rising cost at the figure around 2% compared to the cost of the year 1989. Likewise, there was an the increase of as the amount of approximately 3% in Frankfurt. Between 1996 and 2002, four countries showed increase in the risen prices compared to than the 1989 prices. Among these countries,<(what are these countries?) the cost for homes in London rose with the greatest figure over 10%, while the costs of the overall homes in the rest of the countries went up by just 5%.<(false. 1989년도와 비교해서 5% 가 올라간 나라는 뉴욕 뿐입니다) <need better cohesion> However, the price of average houses fell off as 5% in Tokyo exceptionally.<(도쿄는 1989년도 비해 5%가 낮은 가격이지만 전체적으로 1990-1995비해서는 2.5%정도 increase를 한 것 입니다. )
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