▶ Your Answer : How are you Mr. Smith ?/ Dear Sir/Madam,
This is Mr. Lee from Korea and
I came here three weeks ago.
I have rented lent a house through your an agency <(an agency라고 하시면 Mr. Smith와는 관련이 없는 에이전시에서 집을 구하신게 됩니다.)
and it is a very good place to live with my families. I love the circumstances. <내용 연결이 잘 안됩니다)> One day I have found
that the heating system has stopped working. I do not know the reason
why it stopped. I have called the agency a week ago for the repair, but nothing happened/ but no repair was made and I have not received a call back about it yet.
Since it is too cold outside, I
really need to get this heating system
repaired and need your help.
Below is my request for
the agency and I would like you to inform the agency.
1. Check the coil problems of
the heating system.
2. Check the circuit inside the
heating system.
3. Make sure the heating
system works properly.
I'm looking forward to receive meet your answer.
Thank you
Sincerely,
Lee
Score: 6
Comment: 다른 사람을 통해서 에이전시한테 연락을 취하는게 아니라 에이전시한테 편지를 쓰시는 것 입니다. 또한 what action to take에 대한 부분은 heating을 어떻게 봐달라 보다는 연락을 취했는데 1주일 동안
연락도 없고 heating system이 아직 고쳐지지 않았으니 오히려 바로 연락/repair/explanation/technician을 request하시는데 더 좋습니다. 수고 하셨습니다. |