The given line graph and table show data regarding water use by sector and country.
According to the line graph, farm areas always used more water than the other two area, and water use increased from about 1,000 to 3,000 over the period. While water use of industry and domestic purpose increased slightly.<(sentence fragment/incomplete sentence) It is interesting that global water consumption for agriculture dramatically rose from 1950 only. <(numeric value를 더 주시면 좋을 것 같습니다)
When it comes to the table, population of Brazil was three times bigger than Congo, and the size of irrigated land and water use per person was 265 times and around 40 times bigger than Congo
Overall, it is clearly seen that agriculture has been the main purpose of global water use since 1900 and Brazil must have consumed most water for agriculture.
Score: 5
Comment: 정보가 조금 부족합니다. 또한 글자수고 150미만입니다. Reader가 정보나 글자수가 insufficient하다고 느끼면 패널티가 적용이 될수 있습니다. 비교외에 각 나라나 sector에 대해서 numeric value 정보도 전달을 해주시면 더 좋을 것 같습니다. 수고 하셨습니다.