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In recent years, there is a controversial issue regarding
government subsidies for artists. Some people are for them, while others argue that
alternative ways are required to provide them with financial support. The essay
will discuss both opinions, and then I will give my own perspective.
Several people insist that companies and financial networks
among artists should give money to creative painters and musicians. To begin
with, corporations' financial aids would be beneficial for not only them but
also artists. For example, Lottle (Lotte?) Company in South Korea has held a hold special
painting competition every year to provide outstanding painters with financial
aids. By utilizing Utilizing their creativity, the corporation has made a number of unique
advertisements, and they were successful for the marketing, while painters
could make for a living in the process. In contrast, some experts say that financial networks
among artists may be a great way to financially help each other, encouraging
them to be independent from the capital. (추가적인 설명이 없을 거면, 이 내용은 그냥 지우는 게 낫습니다. 근거가 전혀 없는 주장으로 인식되기 때문이죠.)
Despite these arguments, I strongly believe that
governments should play an important role in offering funding to creative
artists. Firstly, unlike other actors, the government can help artists who
cannot develope their talents enough to apply for other funding opportunities
mentioned above. Since artists should
spend a lot of time to improve their skills and abilities in general, only
governments which hold the public purpose and, at the same time, have a large
amount of budget can give financial subsidies to poor artists without any
condition. Secondly, it is a duty for the government to invest in valuable
cultural assets. Thus, this actor should try to help potential artists that are
too creative to be admired and gain money from other sources in contemporary era. This is because their art works are expected to be priceless in the
future.
In conclusion, although both ideas are reasonable, I firmly
believe that governments have to put their efforts financially on valuable
musicians or painters rather than others. (discuss both views 유형에서 자신의 입장을 결론에서 설명할 때에는 조금만 더 길게 넣어주세요~1줄 정도만 추가되면 충분합니다.) |