Your Answer ▼
Choosing to be self-employed is a
phenomenon more common these days. This affects areas of society in negative
and positive ways. Some people argue that self-employing is positive, but I
personally think that this leads to negative consquences.
First of all, people who choose to be
self-employed would have a difficulty in getting successful results. This is
because they don’t have a good sense of planning for a business. For example,
when self-employed people firstly begin a business like a restaurant, they don’t
know which flavor of foods people usually like and what would attracts customers
exactly. As a result, they would fail that makes a profit more and more since
they should pay much money for successful results. This shows that self-employing
has the negative effects on people’s budget.
Moreover, if people choose to be self-employed,
they have to take all risks occurred in the business because they have the
responbilities of their own business as an owner. For example, if there is an
acctident that would damage to make a profit, people have to spend much money
on solving the accident. So, this leads to a difficulty in making a profit
again. Thus, before choosing to be self-employed, it is better to get such
knowledges as working on a company.
In conclusion, although the number of people who
choose to be self-employed increased, this affects areas of the business in
negative ways. Therefore, people would be better to work for a company before
choosing to be self-employed.
목표점수 : 7.0
소요시간 : 19분
시험일 : 01/04
코멘트 : 에세이는 항상 아이디어 떠올릴 때 수월하지가 않는 것 같아요 |