Some people believe that the personal information of violent criminals should be mad available to the public. Other think that this information should be protected.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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It is a common belief that individual information should be protected even offenders records. However, there is a more persuasive argument that personal report of violent criminals should open to public in order to prevent offense from our community.
On the one hand, some human rights lawyer say that by not being made available to the public would be protect innocent people such as criminals family and proven innocent people. This is because most people hold in contempt people who connected with criminals or even false charged people because they think criminals are also involved in crimes or are badly affected by criminals. For example of my school years, Even though, a student was exemplary student and a student who studied well and had many friends, he was tortured by other class mate and teachers when his fathers who committed a sexual crime information was announced just because his father was sex offender. In the result, he chose to kill himself, and this issue have made a big impact on Korea.
Nevertheless, reporting the information of criminals can protect the society as secondary damage. By revealing the offender's information, people can know who is criminal and watch their action. As a result, they can protect themselves and offenders also can not commit a crime. In South Korea, for instance, Korea government implement a law that sex offenders and murderers information open to public because criminals will be monitored by people. and government allows citizens to avoid them and prevent from criminals' secondary damage. Ultimately, citizens can be protected more effectively through this law. As a result, secondary crime of offenders have been decreasing.
To sum up, while it is apparent that some experts argue that criminals' report should be protected, it is undeniable that it is more important for their information must open to public because of preventing another secondary offence in our community.
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