Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. |
First, successful sports players should get reward for their effort, before successeful player, they spended lots of time for a great score and their youth. For example, when the other peoples went out some where, they only took exercise in the gym. Acording to a newspaper intereste article, 70% of sports players was not company with girl or boy in their youth doue to exercise. This report say that they were really training hard and effort for success. Therefore they should earn moretheir salaries than the others.
Second, sports players will affect to consumer economy. For instance, Michle Jodan who was best basketball player advertised a brand of NIKE, many consumers want buy not only shoes but also NIKE's cloths, and NIKE's brand value rapid increased by a advertisement. According to a report, best effective advertisement is from a famous sports player, 50% of advertiser responded. Thus sports player will affect to spending.
In counclusion, I agree with opinions that successful sports player can earn more salaries because they spended mush effort and affect to consumer economy. The more sucessful sports players, the more save our economy.
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