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In period of
growth, children are affected by many environments and education which are
surrounded. For that reason, governments encourage all children to study in school
at a certain age under compulsion. However, I believe that parents have more
influence on children's life that school, because children usually spend long
time with their family.
Needless to
say, school is a important place for students. They obtain a number of
knowledge and cultivate their mind and body from many kind of classes. Through
the relationship with other people - friends and teachers - they are aware of
what kind of things are happened in some social groups. Besides, by leaning
lots of subjects, children will realize themselves what they like, what makes
them happy, and it can leads to have a dream for their future path.
It is
undeniable fact that school can offer
lots of knowledge and training, but they have less support to children's personality building than their parents. The
personality is the most crucial factor to be a good social member. Since
children are born, they live with their family for a long time. Through the
time, a character of children will build up as their parent's behaviors,
thinking, and guidance. Parents can teach things that how to react polite when
they meet a old person, and how can deal with problems when they face
difficulties. Children can rarely gain these valuable information from school.
It is
obvious true that school and family have impacts on children's growth. In my
opinion, however, the role of parents is more weighty than school because they
influence directly upon a formation of personality of children. Good
personality help them to be a necessary member of society.
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