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우선 task 1
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Your neighbours have a dog that is noisy at night. You can’t sleep. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter:
- describe the problem with the dog
- explain why it is important for you to sleep
- outline what your neighbours could do about the situation.
Dear Mr Brown and Mrs Brown ,
I am Chris Kim, who lives in a block away from your house. I am writing this letter to notify my struggle with regards to your barking dog at night.
Being myself as one of the pet lovers, I do 이중 동사 강조 표현은 잘 쓰지 않을 뿐더러 강한 주장이 있을 때에 씁니다 deeply understand the benefits of having a dog at home. However, I firmly believe that this has to be done without making any trouble to others.
From a week ago, I hardly fall a sleep at night because of your dog’s noise. Not only barking sound but also the noise from its playpen spontaneously wakes me up.
As you know, I am currently working as a public cleaner. This job requires me to start working from 5:00 AM in every morning. Thus, I usually go to bed around 10:00PM for refreshment. Since the cleaning job involves physical labor, I really need to take a peaceful rest.
For this issue, I strongly suggest you to keep down the volume of your dog at your home or at a lockable pet house quietly. I desperately request the fine solution for such a problem. I hope this letter does not offense your warm empathy towards your dog.
I look forward to hearing from you with appropriate resolution.
Yours sincerely,
Chris Kim
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Task Achievement - 7
Coherence and Cohesion - 7
Lexical Resource - 6
Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 7
7.0 예상합니다
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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Modern technology is changing our world. This has advantages such as bringing people closer together through communication. It also has disadvantages such as destroying the differences between cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
task 2
Over the few decades, it is commonly said that advanced technology has brought the massive alterations in our world. Such changes, due to this development, have two facets. Some people believe the communication is more globalized, while others think it as a demolisher of cultural differences. In my belief, though, the benefits of modern technology outweigh the negative concerns.
The development of technology enables people around the world to communicate freely without any difficulties at any and all time. For instance, the invention of a smartphone, such as Iphone from Apple, Galaxy series from Samsung, established the new age of communication. Not only hearing and speaking and texting massages, searching on the Internet, daily scheduling, video phoning and various activities can be done with a small device, a smartphone. Drawing from this, the extensive progressions in technology breaks down the boundaries of time and distance in communications bringing about convenience in human life.
Detractors of such an opinion say that rapid growth of technology has its drawback as ruining the dissimilarities between cultures. However, I believe such an idea can hardly be called a demerit. It is simply because a phenomenon of cultural blending is inevitable as the world requires people to live together by helping one another. Moreover, mix of customs sometimes has pleasant outcomes. To illustrate this, high technology facilitate Japan to accept and adopt the western cultures more in advance in comparison with any other Asian countries. This leads Japan to take a major part of the global financial economy.
To sum up, far reaching technology has more advantages in terms of many perspectives, especially in communication. In addition, this improvement, despite its critics and occasional blemishes, has its potential in bringing up the world toward a better place.
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토탈 1,2 합쳐서 손으로 써서 체크까지 1시간 걸렸습니다. 체크시간은 한 5분 걸렸습니다.. 문제도 읽지 않고 프린트 하고, 샘플 라이팅 책자도 프린트해서 실제 시험처럼 진행해 봤습니다 ㅎ
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잘 쓰셨어요 이 내용을 제 시간 내에 쓰셨으면 잘 쓰셨습니다~
Task Achievement - 8
Coherence and Cohesion - 8
Lexical Resource - 7
Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 7
7.5 예상합니다 |