Both of methods>> what are the both methods ? are needed for making your>> your 등의 말보다 3인칭적인 관점에서 서술하셔야 합니다 kids to succeed. As you know, >> 아카데믹한 글이지 구어체를 옮겨적는 글이 아닙니다 it is very difficult to get get 동사는 피해주세요 earn good reputations for from work and human being as well. As far as children teaching concerned>>?? , trying both of ways might cause confusion to your children. As time goes by, they can find their own ways that are based on parents teaching. By and large, I think raising children to be co-operative people is much better than to be competitive way for the reasons I've mentioned >> I've 라고 쓰지 않습니다 줄임말 안 씁니다 above.
There is only one reason that a competitive person is encouraged more >> than who ?. The reason why is that a strong person will survive in the society. And >> and also so or but은 문두에 쓰지 않습니다 it seems nothing will be changed unless society turns into the right way. The right way is totally changing the modern societal atmosphere which is only aiming competition.
Of course, >> 한 단어 아닙니다 또 부사가 문두에 나오면 뒤에 콤마 붙입니다 good sense of struggling is recommended for developing our country, but, on the other hand, there are so many drawbacks beside the good effect. Competitive things usually make misunderstanding >> 한 단어로 써주세요, disorder , argument,>> 세개 이상 나열에서 마지막 and 앞에 콤마 붙입니다 and even cheating even. It is supposed to hurt or cheat someone to be succeed in our life>> ??. Therefore, >> 콤마입니다 to change our weaknesses, it is recommended to make our descendants to be thoughtful and considerable speculative adults. Consequently, our society will be changed into the right way step by step,>> 콤마 빼주세요 as long as they become more talented human.
현재 글을 쓸 실력이 아닙니다 라이팅 구성 자체를 어떻게 하는지 모르는게 보이구요 논리도 전혀 맞지 않고 있습니다 문단마다 첫 시작은 한 칸 띄어쓰는 들여쓰기를 해줘야 합니다 글자수도 220자 정도구요 논리 부분은 처음부터 모두 어긋나서 어디부터 손을 댈지 몰라 문법만 봐드렸습니다 문법 공부 단어 공부 하신 후 Task1을 쓰세요 Task2는 아직 너무 이릅니다
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