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The table chart presents the amount of salaries of secondary and high school teachers for 20 years in five different nations – Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg, Korea and Japan – in the period of 2009.
The most notable feature of the data is that Korean teachers who work for 20 years were taken the largest amount of salaries whereas Danish teachers who work just now were received the least amount of money and each value was 37W and 6W respectively.
In the first period of work, Korean teachers were taken 10W which was the biggest salaries and Japan followed Korea gave with 9W to the teachers. On the contrary, the teachers who live in Australia and Denmark were paid 6W and 5W in order. As for the Luxembourg, they were shown the average salary, with 8W.
After 15 and 20 years, (comma) they (대명사 사용 주의, they는 누구?) started to work ?? since teachers have started working as a teacher? , the overall amount of salaries increased and especially Korea and japan showed dramatic soaring in salaries at both periods remaining as top leaders.
By analyzing the data, we can conclude that Korean and Japanese teachers were taken the highest salaries while Australian and Denmark teachers ware given the lowest salaries. ->두번째 문단에서 이미 전반적인 summarise가 들어갔기 때문에 다시 반복할 필요 없습니다
SCORE: 6
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