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The pie charts illustrates the changes in total school spending by UK school in 1981, 1991, and 2001. There are five school spendings which are salaries of teachers, furniture and equipment, resources, salaries of other workers, and insurance.
Firstly, in 1981, school spent money a lot for salaries of teacher as much as forty percents. The percents of salaries of workers was twenty eight percents. Both percentages of resources and equipment were fifteen. However, school did not spend money for insurance as much as others.
In 1991, the percentage of teacher’s salaries were increased to fifty. The resources also increased to twenty. Additionally, the insurance (주어 설정 주의.. insurace가 증가한게 아니라 insurance에 사용한 돈이!) was increased slightly. However, the equipment (앞 코멘트와 마찬가지) is decreased to five dramatically.
In 2001, school spent more money for insurance again. The percent of workers’ salaries were still declining to fifteen. The percent of spending for teacher was decreased a little again to forty five. Strangely, the equipment was increased a lot to twenty three.
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