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Deforestation is mainly done by human and is one of the main contributors to destroy our environment. The increase in CO2 emission is directly related to deforestation in the world. As we only have one planet to live, this should be prohibited. There are several efforts that this issue can be addressed by.
First, reforestation policy is one of the solutions can be done by governments. We may find an example in China. Deforestation had been a big problem for the last few decades in China. The Chinese government established a strong policy to replant 무엇을..? 목적어? in the land. As a result, China recovered a significant percentage of forest in its landscape and continuously encourages replanting to prevent environmental destruction and conserve the nature. China could not make this incredible result without such a strong government policy.
Second, some incorrect agreements should be rectified and reviewed. For instance, Kyoto protocol ? 무엇인지 조금 더 자세한 설명 필요 and its decision resulted in encouraging cutting trees in countries although the ultimate goal was to preserve our environment. This international agreement failed to reduce CO2 emission and caused deforestation in countries.
Third, local communities which financially rely on their forest resource should be supported by government. People in this area generally make ends meet up by cutting trees and selling them. Without financial support and educational campaign for them, deforestation will be kept ? among the areas.
To sum up, we only have one planet and deforestation is a biggest contributor to CO2 emission on our atmosphere and significantly linked to climate change which is our greatest challenge in the twenty-first century. Thus, it is time to act to stop it urgently. This cannot be done by a sole country or government. Every country should do their share through strong policy, supporting local communities and reform or review inappropriate protocols.
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