▶ Your Answer :
These two graphs give information on the
sales of six types of clothing in Sweden in 2002 and 2009.
One of the first things to note is that the
largest proportion of the sales in 2002 was T-shirts (63%). This was followed
by blouses, hoodies, and cardigans, which constituted 17%, 10%, and 5% of the
total sales, respectively. The rest of clothing in the market were was jumpers and skirts, and
these two types combined accounted for 5% of the total clothes sales in 2002.
However, there were significant changes in
2009. The sales of blouses considerably increased to 39%, and similar trends were observed in
cardigans, jumpers, and skirts. These accounted for 9%, 4%, and 14% of the
total sales in 2009, respectively. It is also interesting to note that the sales of
jumpers and skirts combined increased from 5% to 18%. On the other hand, the
sales of both T-shirts and hoodies dropped fell by half.
Overall, the largest proportion on clothes
market in Sweden in 2002 was T-shirts, but over the period, blouses became the
most sold type of clothes in 2009. Moreover, the sales of skirts, jumpers, and
cardigans increased whereas the sales of hoodies decreased.
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