▶ Your Answer : Dear Yuka., How are you? I hope you had a safe journey back to Japan,. and that i hope everything is going well for at your studies. I am writing to say that I'm sorry for not giving you back the text book 'Writing Start English' which I borrowed from you last term. You lent it to me just before the final exam to help me prepare for them. Yesterday I found it on my book shelf. Only then I realised that I was made a big mistake to you. Because I suddenly looking back <(??) on what you said to me before, I remembered that you also need the book for the test preparation. Even I even promised you that I will return the book back back the book to you as soon as possible at that time. Please let me know straight away if you need this book for you studies right now or whether you can manage without it for a while. If you need it right away, I will send it out today by next-day express mail. If not, if you don't mind I will send it by regular mail. Please let me know what you want me to do. Once again, I am very sorry to you about my mistake. I look forward to your reply. I hope you enjoy your the holiday. Best regards, Judy Song.
Score: 6.5 Comment: 나 라고 칭하는 I 는 꼭 대문자로 써주셔야합니다. 또한 편지를 열어서 Dear (name) 뒤에는 period가 아닌 꼭 콤마가 와야합니다. 그 외에는 표현과 디테일에 조금 더 신경을 써주시면 좋을 것 같습니다. 수고 하셨습니다. |