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There is no doubt that human beings remain
history at all times. Many history scholars emphasize on the importance of
history because they reckon that many people can learn a lot of things through
historical truths, while some people believe that there is no relation with
between the past and present. This essay will discuss both views and deliver my
opinion.
On the one hand, the people, (존재의 이유가 단 하나도 없는 쉼표입니다.) who believe
that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, reckon (이미 한 번 쓰인 표현이므로 웬만하면 대체해주세요.) that a paradigm
of the present life is totally changed compared to that of the past. Today, all
people live in the smart era which people can use well-improved technologies like
Big data (이게 고유명사인지는 모르겠네요. IT 부분에 대해서 잘 아는 게 아니라...), AI and smartphones. Owing to the breakthroughs, the life patterns in every
field have been changed to the computer-oriented life from people-oriented life
in the past. Therefore, it is hard for historical truths to be used in use the current
life since there is a huge gap of both eras.
On the other hand, the people, who believe
that there are a lot of learns from the past, reckon (여기도 마찬가지입니다. 본론 두 문단 중 최소 한 번은 다른 표현으로 사용해주세요.) that it is a good tool to
minimize mistakes. Actually, many top managers refer to leading skills of
successful historical leaders such as Napoleon and Jinghis Khan. They believe
that there is a common characteristic amongst the successful leaders. It can be
one of learns from the past to effectively manage their companies.
In my opinion, it is true that lessens and learns
from the past are very valuable information to live in current life. Those can
be utilized for all fields because references are always helpful and can be minimized
errors. Distinguishing the past and the present is inappropriate and it is
better to consider that the past is the basis of the present and the future.
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