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The given chart illustrates the anticipated population growth for India and China from 2000 to 2050. (미래에 대한 예측치만 있는 것이 아니라, 과거에 대한 통계 역시 존재하므로 이걸 구분해서 서술해주셔야 합니다.)
There are several features such as growth speed, changing total population.
First, in 2000, the total populations in China is much more than that of India (around 200 billions gap of total populations) (괄호를 사용하지 말고 문장을 구성해주세요~) and growth tendencies of populations are same each other (두 국가 모두 인구수에 있어 증가세를 보인다~이러한 의도로 작성해주셨나요?). However, growth speed of population about India is faster than China.
Second, even if the expected growth population speeds of the two countries are different, the total populations in 2030 is predicted to be the same at around 1.4 billion predicts same population between China and India (around over 1,400 billions).
Final thing is expected total populations anticipate to be reverse after 2030, and growth tendencies are different each other. In China, total populations are decreased after 2030. (미래 쪽으로 수정해주세요~) On the other hands, the populations in India still remains a growth slope is going to increase (여기는 어떤 의미로 적어주셨나요? 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.).
To summarize, total populations of India will be much more than China even if tendencies of population growths are same until 2030. (Task 1은 결론을 내기 위해 존재하는 글이 아니기 때문에, 지금과 같이 표의 전반적인 사항을 요약하는 문단은 서론 바로 뒤에 넣어주시면 됩니다. 표에 대한 설명, 요약을 하기 위해 포괄->구체의 순서를 따르는 것이죠.) |