Many experts become concerned because there
are so many environmental problems around the world these days. Some people argue
that the main problem is the extinct of some species of plants and animals, but
I personally think that the more significant problems are placed by around the
world.
First of all, it is notable that some
particular species of plants and animals in Amazone are diminished by
deforestation. These days, people continuely deforest the trees, flowers and
other plants for their own purposes. The loss of these plants eventually leads
to extinct of particular animals. Also, decreasing the amounts of plants in
Amazone causes the lack of oxygen in the world. This shows that the forest and
animals in Amazone now face the danger of extinct.
Moreover, in the case of North Pole, such
much ice is steadily melted by uprising trend of temperture in the world. This is
caused by the industrial gas from vehicle or factories. As a result, whenever
the ice in North Pole is melted, it causes drought to the world since the
temperture of earth would increased. As this example clearly shows that there
are more environmental problems such as melting ice and drought as well.
On the whole, after considering those both
views, it is evident that there are serious problems in North Pole same as
Amazone. Also, these problems would make environmental causes such as extinct
of nature and drought. For these reasons, I firmly believe that people around
the world should try to solve such problems together
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