Your Answer ▼ This line graph illustrates average CO2 emissions by each individuals of four different European countries from 1975 to 2015.
Overall/In general, (둘 중 하나는 그냥 기계적으로 넣는다고 보시면 됩니다.) It is clear that France is the highest CO2 making country in these four different nations during the whole period while Greece was constantly the country which making made smallest amount of CO2 emissions.
One can see more closely, that Norway made second largest amount of CO2, Spain is the country which has third proportion of CO2 from 1975 to 1985. On the other hand, between 1995 and 2015, Spain was second largest CO2 making country and Norway was third. The most noticeable point in 2015 was that the figures of Norway and Greece became almost the same most noticeably point in 2015 is that Whole Co2 emmision of Norway and Greece was becoming almost same. (엔터를 한 번만 쓰는 일은 없습니다. 아예 엔터 없이 쭉 이어가거나, 두 번 쳐서 문단을 구분해주세요! 이것도 점수에 들어가므로 주의해주셔야 합니다.)
The other interesting aspect of this graph is that Spain and Greece had a consistently increasing trend of Co2 emission. Spain was The figure of Spain rose from four (four 로 써도 되고, 4로 써도 됩니다. 대신, 둘 중 하나를 골랐으면 끝까지 유지해주셔야하지, 지금과 같이 어디는 four, 어디는 8 처럼 일관성 없이 작성해서는 안 돼요.) metric tons to almost 8metric tons in 2015. At the same time, the numbers of Greece increased was from one metric tons in 1975 to over five metric tons of 2015. In a while, France was slowly decreasing trend from under twelve metric tons in 1975 to eight and half metric tons in 2015 in the same period. Norway has upward trend from 1975 with 8 metric tons to 1985 with10 metric tons, on the contrary, which turned to downard trend from 1985 with 10 metric tons to over 5 metric tons in 2015. (위에 수정해드린 것과 비슷하게, 여기도 주어를 정확하게 갖춰주세요~)
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