Writing Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Should private schools receive government funding?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
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The issue of, nowadays most of the private schools receive government funding can be a hugely controversial topic and it can cause heated debate amongst people who hold strong views on this issue. I opine that private schools do not need to gain the government donations.
On the one hand, public school officials say it is difficult to operate with government-backed funds they need more funding support from the government. First of all, the cost of maintaining the school facilities are much harder than people think. For example, such as electric piping and boiler and also a desk and chair are too old they still using those things almost 50 years old thus, it is hard for children to relax in school because there are a lot of minor problems. Moreover, children with financial difficulties should be allowed to enjoy a high-quality education system. The education is most important in people life, sometimes the life changes to positively when children are learning languages and mathematics they can dream their job such as a scientist and economist in order for children to achieve these dreams government funding is paramount.
On the other hand, people say that the private schools are already enough money to operate their school. First and foremost, generally, children living in rich families attend private schools and children parents support a lot of money to private schools. To be specific, there are many gifts that parents give as gifts to teachers except for tuition fees and this alone shows that school officials do not need financial help from the government. Also, if the government gives financial support to private schools, there will be more irregularities in schools. The officials in the school already earn a lot of money and nevertheless, if the government gives them extra financial support then they will use the money to satisfy their own self-interest.
As it has been demonstrated, the public schools need financial support from the government. I believed that private schools already have enough money to operate their school thus, they do not need financial support from the government.
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