topic - compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communucating information. state which you consider to be the most effective.
( comics , books, radio, television, film , theatre. )
Today, we can acess and feel(-->use) numerous kinds of communicating equipment as tools of seeing((-->understanding) one's thought. here are six kinds of ways to communicate listed. Each thing has their (-->its)own style and characteristic to express what they have got. In next paragraghd that are going to be followed, you would see advantages of comics, televisions and films with their other faces, disadvantages.
Firstly, comic, it is(주어중복-->a comic is) widely known as book(-->a book) with some funny pictures in it to help children understand easily. Yes, it's easy.(-->질문,대답형태는 빼시는 것이 낫습니다) It(-->This) is the strongest advantage of it. it is(-->A comic book can be) read easily and comfortable with no(-->comfortably without a) preassure to understand. The point is that,(-->빼시고) however, it could be read easily(-->can be read) just for fun even though someone who made(-->the author of) this comic wanted(-->wants) to show and make reader feel seriousness(-->to express serious ideas) It could be said that easiness of comics have got (-->have got은 쓰지마시길)two aspects contemporarily.(-->two aspects 가 뭔지 설명필요)
Secondly, it is about television. It (-->Secondly, television)has been commonly used since it was made(-->it had been invented). Someone even calls(-->consider) television as his own (-->his or her) best friend,(-->.) It is the advantage of it, friendliness.(-->This is mainly for friendliness and comfort that TV gives people.) People have got used to watch it(-->Most people watch TV) without dislikeness(-->any stress) . They can absorb informations(-->information) that are arouse(-->generated) from television fast(-->in a short time). Because it is easy as(-->it is as easy as) comics, however, something bad(-->bad는 쓰지마셔요) could happen(-->TV can have a negative effect) such as(-->.For example) information from television is really massive so(-->so massive that) important things could be regarded as advertisment(-->advertisements) or just gossips.
Thirdly, for the last, it is film that has been developing for more that(-->than) 50 years. it has enough impact to make viewers feel(-->understand) the information in it. Of course, it is impactive(-->단어를 만드셨네여^^) under the circumstance of good plot is existing. The probelm is, although the plot of film has good quality, if the watchers do not understand, it is decided(-->often considered) as a boring and a sort of crap.(-->crap,,이런 격한 단어 쓰심 안됩니다아)
In shorten,(-->Overall) all these three kinds(-->equipments) have got(-->got 빼시고) their own ways to commununicate. However, in my opinion, television, which is commonly used by people all over the world, is the most effective tool in this generation.