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The graph illustrates the number of total hours of televised three types of TV shows on BBC in Britain over the 30 years.
To begin with, the films and the dramas showed a stable increase from about 500 hours in 1970 to 1800 hours in 2000, rising at around four times. In terms of sports, there was an irregular change in audiences' rating during each years. In 1970, the sports program had the lowest number of hours approximately 300 hours, and in 1980, there was a significant growth, with the time reaching about 1000 hours. However, It demonstrated a up and down tendency again (from 600 hours in 1990 to 800 hours in 2000). When it comes to the news and the weather, the change was considerably dramatic. It started with only around 300 hours in 1970, although the total time reached at about 2800 hours in 2000, showing a remarkable rise throughout to 1100 hours in 1980 and 1600 hours in 1990.
In conclusion, the number of hours that the films , the dramas ,the news and the weather were shown increased similarly ,during the entire period with the exception of those of sports having fluctuation.
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