▶ Your Answer : The table shows information on when people go shopping to ASDA supermarket, what is the main consideration according to genders.
The prominent causes are alomst the same to both genders, males and females >> both gender라 하면 남성 여성 밖에 없으므로 안 써주셔도 됩니다, which are the location, reputation and parking lots. 25 men visit the market, because it is just near their houses. When they go shopping, they consider the condition of parking facilities and how reputation it has. 22 women think the similar thing, they think 5 people more about reputations than males. People who consider a sense of closeness with clerks are approximately triple less than those of reputations or parking places. 4 males go to the market, as it is open throughout 24 hours, but no females judge it is important about that. The important consideration seems like competitive prices, but it is not. Only 14 men and 17 women decide to go to the market owing to the reasonable prices.>> 표에서 competitive prices를 언급했지만 그게 reasonalbe한 price인지 모릅니다 확인이 안 되는 부분은 언급을 하시면 안 됩니다
Overall, the reason why they make a decision to go to the ASDA market is very similar to men and women.
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Task Achievement - 7
Coherence and Cohesion - 6
Lexical Resource - 6
Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 7
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