▶ Your Answer : The means of making a living diverges into two avenues ways. The most common road that people normally take is to get be employed by either a public or private institution, while the other is to put up your own enterprise and have your personal stamp.
Being an employee for a company of some kind seems to be a much safer choice. The paycheck just rolls in every month and even some multinational corporations pay astronomically. A lot of employees dream and work towards being promoted and eventually moving in the top circle. However, few workers will reach this level and there are gaps as to what an employee can earn.
Being an entrepreneur, on the other hand, is a bit more daring and a challenge which even so, has its own appeal. Those who choose this path become their own boss and get involved at all levels. While many employees more often than not do not have much say in the direction of a business, self-employment allows for the owner with more flexibility in decision making to make a decision. As well, the possible monetary and psychological rewards are beyond what a mere employee can expect.
Having experienced being both an employee and an entrepreneur, I believe entrepreneurship sits is better with for me. Without the men and women who took the risks and the conviction to follw their hearts, a lot of frontiers would have remained unconquered.
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