▶ Your Answer :
Your neighbours have
recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houselflat.
Write a letter to your
neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for
the noise
apologise
describe what action you
will take
Dear MR. Tom,
I have well received noticed your unfortunate situation with regards to the
noise from my houseflat. Firstly, I firstly want to make a deep apology for such inconvenience.
As you guessed in your complain letter, the noise is from my
speaker >> amplifier. Since I am new to this living community this is the first time to live here, recently, I recently devoted myself to join
a local band to adapt to this new environment. In the band, I play the electric
guitar which needs a speaker >> an amplifier for practicing. Therefore, I bought one and, I
thought, and I played at a right >> proper volume that does not not to disturb others. However, it
seems that it annoys neighbors, including you.
For such indicated struggle, I will take following actions. First, I
will make a room to be completely sealed completely. In addition, I will place the speaker
on the top of thick layered wooden cases. This will prevent the sounds to travel straight
from the speaker >> from travelling to your house. Not only that I promise to play not only after 8:00PM and play
only during other times but also with lower volume during the other time.
Again Sincerely, I sincerely ask you an your acceptance to my apology. If you have
any other concern with the noise, you can just let me know.
I hope my resolution is appropriate for your trouble.
Yours sincerely, YKim
202자~
문법을 철저하게 지켜주시길 바랍니다 또한 말이 잘 안 되는 내용이 있어 고쳐드렸습니다 and 에 걸리는 동사는 중복되면 뒤에 동사를 삭제하게 됩니다 중복하지 말아주세요
Task Achievement - 6 Coherence and Cohesion - 5 Lexical Resource - 6 Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 5
5.5 예상합니다
You should spend about 40
minutes on this task. Write about the following
topic: Nowadays we are producing
more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is
happening? What can governments do to
help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your
answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. You
should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write
about the following topic: It has long been
worldwidely long noticed that the amount of rubbish thrown out are is dramatically increased
dramatically for last few decades. There are many factors involved with this
case. To change this ailing phenomenon, the >> government는 the와 함께 다닙니다 government must make early a radical
decision early with strong reinforcement. There
are mainly two types of rubbish, industrial and household. Both of them have
increased, as there is a steady population growth of population with inventions of new technology.
The
waste from an industrial sector is abundant in its size and often contains toxic
materials. Even though there is a number of companies use recycling and
pollution free resources, the waste is unavoidable. For instance, ‘Eco Happy’,
a company manufacturing a box of tissue form recycling papers, produces
industrial waste in production. This is simply because it is the process that produces
rubbish, not the final product. Clean water becomes unclear solution with
chemical disposal within for taking ink out from the overused >>가운데 - 빼주세요 any type of
papers such as newspapers. Not only that the chemicals are firstly contained at
a bottle, before it is used, which eventually turns eventually out to be a rubbish at
ending process. Drawing from this, the even eco-friendly products contribute dire
problems of ever the increasing amount of rubbish.amount >> 명사 두개를 계속 나란히 놓는 형태의 실수를 하고 계시네요 Not only industrial
waste, but also household trashes are one other causes. These come out in various
ways, from broken furniture to foods. Some of items are buried underground but they are
not rotten for 100 years. For example, plastic bag does not decomposed but it is used
almost everywhere in the world. Moreover, these wastes will remain for long
period. The rise in population acts as a catalyst for the growth of rubbish. For this issue,
it is the government, which should always take a first action to restrict the ever
increasing amount of any type of rubbish. Applying heavy fines to those who throw
away waste over their regulated limit, also encouraging people to use eco-friendly goods could be the solutions. Even it still produces garbage but less than the normal one, and recycle items
can demonstrate positive impact >> 무슨 말인지 모르겠네요.
To sum up, I
believe, most important factors are people’s awareness on social and polluting
issues with regards to rubbish. It is our responsibility to give our next
generation with the clean environment.
364자.
전체다 손으로 썻고, 체크 시간까지 포함해서 1시간 걸렸습니다. 테스트 컨디션처럼 봤습니다.. 양에 비해 시간이 무척이나 남았던? 느낌이었던거 보면 요번 주제는 저랑 좀 잘 맞았다는? 느낌이네요.. 체크 시간으로 5분 남아서 한번 쭉 읽어 보면서 빠르게 고치긴 했네요..... 점수는 어떻게 나올진 모르겠지만요.. ㅎㅎ --------------------------------- 시험장 가셔서 이 정도의 양을 쓰실 수 있을까 하는 의구심이 드는건 사실입니다 집과 시험장의 분위기는 겪어본 사람들은 알게 되죠 또한 글이 길어져서 논리를 충분하게 보충할 수 있지만 그에 따른 문법 실수나 반복 등에 대한 리스크도 뒤따릅니다 Task1 Task2 최소 단어의 양은 총 400자이지만 쓰신 글은 500자를 훌쩍 넘네요 중간중간 모르겠는 문장들도 꽤 나옵니다 주의해주세요 또한 글은 Task1 Task2 따로 올려주시길 바랍니다 Task1 에서 한 실수를 Task2 에서도 실수를 하고 계속 반복됩니다 Task Achievement - 6 Coherence and Cohesion - 5 Lexical Resource - 6 Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 6 6.0 예상합니다
총점 6.0 예상합니다
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