■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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▶ Topic : Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. | |
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▶ Your Answer : The prevalence of golobalization is sure to have far-reaching effects on society. From this aspect, a contentious issue is raised whether the pros of teaching a foreign language to primary
school students are far more than to secondary school atudents or not. In this essay, pros will be
addredded as follows.
The acquisition of a second language depends on timing. Considering the fact that children's thought
has strong vitalization, the high efficiency of mastering a foreign language is expected because younger brain is more suitable for learning. For example, 85% of bilingual people has responsed that they
learned a second language before they are 10. Therefore, a high number of students who are good at
foreign language can be produced by primary school more than secondary school at the same period.
In addition, education of language demands a large amount of time. With the era of overflowing
education, middle school or high school students have no room for learning a second language since a great deal of the pupils struggles with the other subjects which are crucial to pass a well-known
university. Even though they study the language such as English or Japaness, it is just a process of the memorizing exams. However, learning a foreign language as early as possible has a drawback.
Bilingual children are slower to acquire vocabulary than are monolinguals because their brain is destined to hard work which deals with couple of languages.
In a nutshell, second-language education to the elementary school students would be a huge task for
them considering their ability to grasp both side of words. Nonetheless, advantage that children can be placed on the most efficient way to be a bilingual person overwhlems the disadvantage. Furthermore,
teachers have to concern whether secondary school students have enough time to learn a foreign
language or not. | |
Bilingual children are slower to acquire vocabulary than are monolinguals
이부분에서 사람 be slower to V+N than be 사람 이건 제가 외운건데 문법적으로 이해가 잘 안되네요 than 다음에 꼭 be동사를 써야하는건가요? 설명 해주실수 있을지.. 부탁드립니다.
저번에 첨삭 처음 맡겼는데 생각보다 고득점이 나와서 놀랐습니다. 그리고 인터넷으로 공짜로 하는건데도 세심한 부분까지 해주셔서 정말 감동받았습니다.
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