▶ Your Answer : Traditionally, children have begun studying foreign languages at secondary school, but introducing them earlier . However, earlier linguistic education is recommended by some educationalists. This policy has been adopted by some educational authorities or individual schools, with both positive and negative outcomes >> 이 정책이 채택됐다 라는 식이 아니라 찬반을 해서 이유와 그에 맞는 본인의 경험이나 지식을 예로 들어야 합니다.
The obvious argument in its favour is that young children pick up acquire languages much more easily than teenagers. Their brains are still programmed to acquire their mother tongue, which facilitates learning another language, including their mother tongue, and, unlike adolescents, they are not inhibited by self-consciousness>> ?? 자의식에 의해 금지되지 않는단게 언어를 배우는거랑 무슨 관련이 있나요?.
The greater flexibility of the primary timetable allows for more frequent, shorter sessions and for a play-centered approach, >> the 비교급 형태는 쓰지 말아주세요 또한 thus는 문장을 이어주는 기능이 없습니다 부사입니다 Thus, maintaining learners' enthusiasm and progress. Their command of the language in later life will benefit from this early exposure>>??, while learning other languages subsequently will be easier for them. They may also gain a better understanding of other cultures>> 너무 연관성이 없게 나열만 됐네요.
There are, however, some disadvantages On the other hand, primary school teachers are generalists, and may not have the necessary linguistic skills themselves. If specialists have to be are brought in to deliver these sessions>>??, the flexibility referred to above is diminished. If teaching language in primary school language teaching is not standardized, secondary schools can >> if 절의 동사 주절의 조동사 시제 일치시켜주세요 be faced with a great variety of levels in different languages within their intake, resulting in a classroom experience which undoes the earlier gains>>??. There will be no advantage if enthusiastic primary pupils become demotivated as soon as they change schools>> change school ?? 갑자기 왜 학교를 바꾸자마자 그렇게 되나요?. However, these issues can be addressed strategically within the policy adopted.>> both views 가 아닙니다 하나만 정해서 서술해주세요
Anything, which encourages pupils to learn language learning , give benefits to society culturally and economically,>> 콤마 빼주세요 and early exposure to language learning language contributes to this>>??. Young children’s innate abilities should be harnessed to make these benefits more achievable.
연관성 없는 내용과 불필요한 말, 무슨 말인지 잘 모르겠는 영작이 있습니다
문단은 4개로 해주세요 주장을 내세웠는데 그에 대한 근거와 예시가 적거나 없어서
설득력 전달력이 현저하게 떨어집니다 문단 하나 날리고 날린 만큼 각 본론에 예시를 넣어주시구요
테스크에서 하란 대로 해주세요
Task Achievement - 5 Coherence and Cohesion - 4 Lexical Resource - 6 Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 5
5.0 예상합니다
|