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This graph illustrates about world population and distribution (population distribution? 어떤 distribution입니까?) in each continent during a century from 1950 to 2050. Generally, the sum of population in the world had dramatically soared up from 2.5 billion in 1950 to 6 billion people until 2000, before it is forecasted to be 1.5 times more in 2050.
When it comes to distribution of world population, the Asia is predominantly in charge of 어색한 단어 표현 the population with around 60% all over the period. Until now, the second largest population is the Europe (두번째로 큰 인구수=유럽이 될 수 없습니다. 두번째로 큰 인구가 유럽에 있었다, 유럽이 두번째로 큰 인구를 '가지고'있었다는 식의 구체적인 표현이 필요), marked 22%, and 12% in 1950, and 2000 respectively, but this position will be swapped with Africa in 2050, charging ? with 7% in Europe and 20% in Africa respectively. Latin America and North America show the similar trend with Europe and Africa. However, the population of Oceania is comparatively stable at approximately 1%.
In conclusion, the developed countries, (comma) such as Europe and North America have a tendency that population will be decreased in 2050, while under-developed countries, (comma) like Africa and Latin America show dramatic increases in the future.
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