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According to this diagram, the information about
the life cycle of salmon is given. Each step of a salmon’s growth growing and change in
its living area are described.
Firstly, the salmon leaves its eggs between
small stones, which is located below the reed in the upper river. Salmon eggs spend approximately
5 to 6 months in this slow-moving, upper part of the river. After that, the baby
salmon of 3 to 8 centimeters, which is called ‘fry’, moves its habitat to a much
lower area of the river where waters flows are running faster. The fry usually spends 4 years here
and grows into a ‘smolt’ which is about with the size of 12 to 15 centimeters long.
For the next step, this middle-aged smolt
alters its living area one more time to the open sea, which seems quite a
different environment. When 5 years passes are passed, now the adult salmon, whose
length of body is about 70 to 76 centimeters, returns to the upper river where
it was is born.
In conclusion, it takes almost 10 years for a the salmon to fully grow up and to come back to its hometown. The salmon also spends
a half of its life in the open sea to be an the adult.
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