“Some
people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of
particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more
important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own
opinion.”
We
have to concern about all of environmental problems around us. It is not good situation that argue about what is more important environmental problems.
Someone says the main environmental problem is extinction of specific species of
plants and animals. And the others say that we have more important environmental
problem. Both views need to be discussed before making a decision.
I saw a video that tells one species disappears in a few seconds. When we concentrate on other things, some species of animal or
plant exterminate in somewhere. I am very shocked after I saw
this video. I realized that we have to worry about loss of animals and plants
and learn about more information about this situation. Many experts do their best to find
solutions to protect our animals and plants. It is clear that this is the one
of the most important in environmental problems.
However, there are few things to do for extinction of animals and plants in our daily lives. The only one method is just concern about this problem. The practical solution we can do is changing indirect causes. One of the most important
causes is that we make a lot of garbage. Some people think that it is too easy to solve. But I experienced this is not a simple problem. When I bought some groceries and delivered some foods, there are so many
plastic bags and packages. We just have been making a lot of garbage without awareness. So I think we have to use our own shopping bag that
can be reused. And we should avoid having a takeaway. These methods are what
we can do to solve environmental problems.
To sum up, it is clear that extinction of specific species of animals and plants is a bad problem. But i think that reduction of garbage in our everyday lives is more serious environmental problems. (314)
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