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The bar graph illustrates how much money five groups of population in Malaysia spent on public transport, including rails, buses,taxis on a weekly basis in 2008.
Overall, it can be seen that taxis were the most popular to all of age groups, while expenditure on train usage were decreased for member of the public as they grew older. People paid approximately the same sum of the money on the buses until they were in their sixties, when spending fell in the senior age groups.
The highest usage of public transport was seen taxis, in of those the under 65, who spent approximately 6RM each week, while buses and rail's expenditures were between 2RM and 3RM per week. In contrast, as for people under 75 under the 75 ages, the usage of taxis were just at least 3RM each week, also trains and buses were spent and less than 1RM per week was spent on trains and buses. Over the 75 age groups, taxis's expenditures were less than 2RM and the other transport were spent less than 1RM per week.
안녕하세요. 6번째 라이팅입니다.
시험은 6월말에 볼 예정이구요! 4월정도에 라이팅 연습을 제대로 못하고 간 시험은 5점이 나왔습니다.
다른 과목들은 overall 6.0 맞추는데 무리가없어서 라이팅 목표점수는 5.5 입니다 !
Enter 치는 연습도 해봤구요, 연필로 쓴것도 첨부할게요 ! 감사합니다 !
총평: 일단 표가 첨부되어있지 않아서 점수는 생략했는데, 대략 문법+어휘만 보더라도 절대로 5.0까지 떨어질 글은 아니기 때문에 크게 걱정하실 필요는 없습니다.
줄 나누기의 경우 사진에 첨부해주셨듯이 시험장에서 그대로 해주시면 되겠습니다! 이정도로만 유지되면 무조건 5.5-6.0은 가능하니까, 대신 실제 실전에서도 이정도로는 쓸 수 있게 실전 적응을 꼭 해주세요!
+다음부터는 표도 같이 첨부해주세요~
수고하셨습니다 :_ |