다국적 회사 다니고 본사로 6개월 파견가고 싶은 상황을 매니저에게 편지로 요청
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Dear Mr. Chris,
I am writing to request for transfering for a transfer to our head office in the US for six months. I'd like you to accept this for our team's development.
Firstly, the reason why I am interested in our head office is because I hope to widen my point of view and inspire new ideas for our future projects. This is a pretty good opportunity to improve my skills and make a close relationship with the employees in the head quarter. This can makes us our projects go well in the future as well.
For my current work, I plan to take over Jim Jim is planned to take over for a time being. He is so talented in with this area, and as well as has been my assistant for three years. I am going to keep in touch with him during my absence in team, in order to prepare for the unexpected cases.
In addition to that, I am sure that I will set up the remote access using our intranet to work for my project, always. I can work in the cloud based job-sharing system. If it is not available, we can use e-mail or messenger using MS-Teams. I ensure that I will finish these set-up before I leave the office.
Please take into account about this chance for the team, and myself to be good for team and me. I look forward to hearing your answer soon.
Yours faithfully
Daniel Ahn
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