Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than
to work for a company or organisation. Why
might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
-Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant
examples from your knowledge or experience.
In
the present days, a number of people prefer to be a self-employed person rather
than to be a staff of a company for various reasons. However, at the same time,
self-employment would indeed also have its own negative aspects. In this essay,
the main factors for having a self-employed job and the drawbacks of that will be
addressed.
As
regards the major reasons (무엇에 대한 이유인지를 다시 한번 상기시켜주시는 게 좋습니다. 이러한 핵심에 대한 꾸준한 상기는 매우 중요하므로 참고해주세요~), sole proprietorship would keep people from the strict
and stressful company structure. For example, it can be easily observed that employees
are forced to conform with the direction of seniors and culture of firm without
any complaints, especially in Korean and Japanese major companies of Korea and Japan. Secondly,
self-employment would ensure time flexibility, regarding working hours,
commuting and holiday. On account of a low need for face-to-face cooperation or
interaction with coworkers and seniors, people can freely arrange their time
for work and relaxation and, as a result, work and life balance would be improved.
On
the other hand, heavy responsibility and workloads would be the fundamental
disadvantages of being self-employed. Firstly, comprehending every aspect of
business such as accounting, marketing and promotion is vital for a self-employed
person to make a precise and profitable decision. In this regard, they should
have a massive burden of entire responsibility for the results of making a wrong
decision. Besides, an enormous amount of workload would be unavoidable due to
the absence of coworkers and the difficulty of distributing the tasks.
In
conclusion, the inclination that many people have started engaging in
self-employed business have emerged due to unpleasant company structure and
unguaranteed time flexibility. Although being self-employed has its own benefits,
it would also show some negative features in terms of responsibility and
workloads.
감사합니다 :)
총평: (7/8/8/7) 7.5
이정도면 아주 깔끔한 축에 속합니다. task1에서 설령 많이 깎인다고 하더라도 7점은 안정적으로 넘길만한 좋은 글이었네요. 수고하셨습니다 :)