라이팅 task1인데요
문제를 올릴 수가 없어서;ㅠ 그냥 문법이나 문장 어색한 부분 첨삭 부탁드려요^^
According to the graph, global water use has steadily increased for a century from 1900 to 2000. There are three sectors and those are agricultural, industrial and domestic use. Especially, Agricultural use increased more compared to the others. The common thing of three sectors is they started to increase more from 1950 onwards.
Second, on the chart about water consumption in
p.s 아 근데 시험장에서는 손으로 쓰는건가요? 아님 컴퓨터로 치는 건가요?
아이엘츠 시험 준비를 처음해봐서요 ㅠㅠ아직 아는게 별로 없어요;;