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Dear college library staff
My name is Scott and I have borrowed a few books from your library. The books are to be returned to a shelf on 10th of June, however but >> however는 문장을 이어주는 기능이 없습니다, regrettably, I will not be able to return them until the due date for a reason below.
I am planning to visit my cousin who has become seriously ill recently. He has been told that he has a life-threatening cancer. Since my cousin lives far away from my place, I and my family My family and I >> 주로 자신을 뒤에 씁니다 have already rent a car to accommodating my whole family members to get >> 아카데믹에서 get은 좋지 않은 동사입니다 너무 많은 뜻이 있어 자신의 어휘력을 안 좋게 보여줄 수 있기 때문입니다 arrive there.
I will be able to return them by 16th of June when I get back. I will pay Any additional cost occurred by the delay would be paid by myself. I sincerely apologise for the delay, and hope this letter assures you that there will be no more delay in the future.
Please accept my apology.
Scott
약간 형식에 맞춰쓰는 듯한 작문이 보였습니다
부드럽게 써주시고 단어도 더 다양하게 혹은 문법 실수를 안 만드시고 다양하게 쓰시면 6.5 7.0 가능하다고 봅니다
Task Achievement - 7
Coherence and Cohesion - 6
Lexical Resource - 6
Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 6
6.0 예상합니다
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