Cambridge Ilets 8 Writing Task 2 문제입니다.
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best war to solve growing traffic and problems
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
Over the past few decades, the number amount of consumption of gasoline has been dramatically increased dramatically. Such an increase of consumption of petrol has been causing many problems over the world such as traffic and air pollution>>가운데 -빼주세요. Some people believe that the rising the price of petrol is a good solution of this problems. However, In this essay, I will discuss what is are fundamental problems and the solutions.
A lot of people and the government have begun to feel that there are many problems concerned associated with expending gasoline by driving transport automobiles. To begin with, By using vehicles, It has been occurring issues such as global warming and going up cars the soaring number of cars. One solution that people can think is to increase the price of gasoline. The rising price will be able to make people spend much less petrol. In addition, it will encourage people to use public transport because people will be worried about the fare of that.
However, it is not a fundamental solution to an only increase price. Although the spending of petrol will decrease, people will keep using their own vehicles, which means the pollution will keep going. Therefore, What I would like to offer is two ways. One is to find an alternative energy instead of using petrol. By looking for an alternative energy such as a water-power generator and the force of wind, it will be able to stop polluting. The other one is that the government extends public transport that people can use easily, conveniently and effectively. By doing these policies, they can solve the problems caused by using petrol such as air pollution>> 가운데 - 빼주세요 뒤에 traffic jam도 마찬가지입니다 and traffic jam at the same time.
In conclusion, I strongly do not agree with the point of view of increasing the price of that petrol. In my opinion, I insist that we can solve these problems by finding an alternative energy and making more public transport.
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Task Achievement - 7
Coherence and Cohesion - 7
Lexical Resource - 6
Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 6
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