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As society is changing into the modernisation, many households' life become more convenient than in the past. -> Topic과 관계없는 시작 Someone considers that parents may give their children to do a housework, while others argue that children do not have to hlep with their parents for doing with a household chore. For this text, i I ('나'를 지칭하는 I 는 무조건 대문자!) will give my opinion about that children must help to parents' housework.
First of all, children through the process of doing a housework children can make a cooperation. Particularly, children recently have a difficulty to make conversation with their parents because of their busy life. As this process continuesd, it can has a capability to make a individualize ?? between parents and children. Therefore, they have to make an opportunity to realize understand each other as by taking a househoud chores mutually. Thereby, as they also have a strong bond with their parents, 주어 어디? can make a harmonious environment with in their family. Therefore, i I think children should attend the housekeeping for to help their parents.
On top of that, children also can learned the method that how to manage their time effectively by taking a housework. As clearly seen, it is evident that many children tend to waste their time to do an individual task for their enjoyment. For this reason, starting to have experience of the housekeeping in childhood is beneficial to prevent their time by using their time without any consideration. Moreover, it can build a sense of respponsibility to manage their time as when they plan to do the task efficiently. In this regard, parents aspire to do a household chores for their children.
To sum up, patents might consider that taking a household chore is an irritatinge task for their children. But, to build the responsibility of their childrens life, they should give their help to do a housework chores as well as possible.
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