Your Answer ▼ The bar chart illustrates the figures of males and females who worked as a a teacher in six different parts about educational facilities places in the UK in 2010. In general, the amount of female was more than male especially, nursery/ pre- school and primary school. (전반적인 특징이라고 보기에는, 세 개의 항목에서는 거의 비슷하고, 엄청난 격차가 나는 건 두 개의 항목 뿐입니다.
It is clear that the percentages of women who worked in nursery/ pre- school and primary school were 95 percentages and 90 percentages respectively. (일단 95 percent 라고 작성해주셔야 알맞은 표현이 됩니다. 그리고, 이 수치 자체를 제시하는 것은 크게 의미가 없어요. 바로 뒤에 이어지는 문장에서와 같이, 이 수치가 어떠한 의미를 가지는 것이 중요합니다. 그러므로, ~~%였는데, 이 수치가 6개 항목 중 가장 컸다~~와 같이 한 문장으로 깔끔하게 이어주세요.) Moreover, the proportion of females in about nursery/ pre- school occupied the largest point among the six different educational parts. On the contrary, the portion of nursery/ pre- school about men took up the smallest figure as 3 percentages (여기도 마찬가지입니다.) among the six different instructive sections.
In the case of private training institute and university, the proportions of men were bigger than women by roughly 5 percent points . The percentage of private training institute at men was more than women by nearly 10 percent points. The figure of men at university was more doubled than women. The figure of men at university was more than double of that of women
According to the percentages of college about men and women, that was same as 50 percentages (여기도 마찬가지이겠고요.). In the case of secondary school, the figure of women bigger than men by over 5 percent points. |