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There is a disagreement regarding the issue of whether it is best to accept bad situations such as an unsatisfactoy job and shortage of money or not. Some people argue that it is better to accept such these situations, but I personally believe that we should try and improve such situations because this could lead to positive consequences. Firstly, if people try to find the way how improves a situation of shortage of money, people could feel motivated. This is because people will continuely try to find ways that earn money to solve shortage. For example, in the case of Bill Gates, he made a computer system called Microsoft for earning money when he was in poverty. As a result, now he became one of the richest people in the world since Microsoft that he developed was greatly successful. This shows that trying to find ways how improve bad situations leads to the positive consequences. On the other hand, in some situations, it is better to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job. This is because people can’t focus on tasks of a company, if they always try to improve satisfactory of job. Although there is a good aspect of the job, people would only keep the negative perspective of their job. This would lead to the situation that people can’t make a profit in company. This shows that it is best to accept a bad situation in the areas of job. In conclusion, the issue concerning this topic is contentious because this has both positive and negative effects on society.Therefore, people should decide to whether they try and improve the bad situations or not depending on appropriate enviornment.
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