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Nowadays, there is a pressing issue
regarding equlity in educations. Some people insist that there should not be a
gap between the numbers of man and women students in all majors in universites.
I
strongly agree with this idea because it could have positive effects
on a society.
To begin with, equal
numbers male and female students in each subject would play an important role in
dealing with gender inequality. In the era
of industrial society, there were various gender roles so that man tended to study important
majors such as economics and political science and woman used to give up to be educated
in universities. Thus, the equal educational opportunities in gender would have
a positive impact on the change of the problematic patriarchal
culture.
In addition, students would
learn the culture of the other gender in univerisities which have same numbers
of male and female in their subjects. In particular, males have not experienced
females are likely to inappropriately behave because they do not know how to maintain
relationships with young woman. This would be taught by the classes with equal number
of gender, with male students understanding female ones. This experience would be
substantially beneficial for them, when they become workers and have contact and
communicate with a variety of people after they graduated the universities.
In conclusion,
I strongly believe that universities should provide students with subjects have
same numbers of man and woman students because it would be helpful to cope with
gender inquality and conflict in a society.
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