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These days, some people argue that music does not allow people to remind different cultures and ages at the same time. However, I firmly believe that it shows not just the expressions of many eras but also a nation's history.
To begin with, it is undeniable that music describes lots of generations' lifestyles together. In general, many people, who are different ages, tend to share unique opinions through music. To illustrate a good example of this, tender generations in Korea are into pumping into pop music as well as making own cultures like a trend wearing flat caps. Moreover, they delight in going into clubs in order to appreciate hip hop music. In contrast, senior citizens are in favour of listening to trot music or jazz. With the effects of these musics, they prefer staying in calm and relaxed places. Thus, when two generations get together with each other, they are more likely to have conflicts.
On top of that, music is an ideal method to show many countries' historical values and cultures. To be specific, humans have depended on music in many fields since the prehistoric era. As a matter of fact, our ancestors in the ancient era had valued music as a means of performing rituals to pray for maintaining a peaceful life. However, as time has flown, the roles of music have changed from celebrating national ceremonies to alleviating stress. At this moment, some people generally listen to the music when commuting to work or putting their feet up at flat.
To sum up, music has contributed to expressing people's different backgrounds as well as many countries' history. For these reasons, I see eye to eye on this topic. (42 minutes, 282 words)
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