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People face a number of problems while living a life. For that reason, it is important for them to know how to deal with these problems appropriately. Some people think that accepting the problem is the best solution. However, others deem that they have to make some changes to make (두 make 중 하나는 다른 표현으로 대체해주시는 게 좋습니다.) situation better. This essay will articulate both arguments and express my opinion.
First of all, if people accept their difficult situation and adopt to it, they do not need to be stressed out with their reality. One one of the most important things in one’s life is to be happy. People do not have to struggle for something that is hard to change. People should know as well how to be satisfied with their existing things. Sometimes a/the situation could be turn out worse after they try to make some changes. For instance about 30years ago in Korea there were many people who wanted to achieve American dreams, however most of them failed and became far poorer. (이 상황에 대해서 구체적으로 서술하지 못할 경우, 그냥 빼는 게 백 배 낫습니다.)
On the other hand, some other people others contend that people should do whatever they can to make improvements of their situation. They think that people could move forward and go to higher level in their lives when they overcome their bad circumstances. There is a saying, “No pain No gain” If people want to stay at their present position, they are would not be able to escape from bad environments forever. Of couse, it would be painful. However, if people try repeatedly and make it finally, their life will be upgraded to a higher level and they could have other more exciting dreams or goals than before.
I agree with the statement that people sould make an effort to make their environments better. The more they progress forward in their lives, the more things they could experience. It seems that it is too much of a waste of our lives to do nothing to improve lives. Everyone has their own dreams and they have to strive to make it come true through improving their environments. However, when they have obstacles or impediments which are impossible to change, exerting the ability to accept that circumstance positively is crucial, too. People do not need to be depressed with unchangable issues. Getting used to it and being satisfied with what we are containing now would be able to bring about happines into our lives. |